Wednesday, June 24, 2009

3WW (CXLIII)

Image of a container house, in Hong Kong's New Territories, hidden by a wild, bamboo hedge.Dear Gentle Reader,

It's 3WW time, again.

I am just out of the operating room and rather groggy from the anaesthesia.

Capricious (fickle) fates have revealed sparkling wet bits through new, precise, surgical wrinkles; crescents that I have been assured will go away.

I told them I would, too.

So they upped my anaesthesia.

I'll spare you the details, but the nurses were amused and the anaesthetist was startled.

I likely should have told them that I have a propensity for waking up mid-surgery, although one would presume that the various surgeons and specialists would share these amusing bits of trivia amongst themselves.

This week (CXLIII) the words are fickle, sparkle, and wrinkle.

Further, each haiku gets its very own American sentence title.



Love broken, made, or found must be hinted, hunted in seventeen sounds

the wrinkle in love
is not fickle luck or fate
when eyes sparkle, wet



Earth science alchemy: liquid fire transforms to cool obsidian

fickle magma pops
bubbles, wrinkles, sparkles black;
broken fire in stone


Gieves and Hawkes, Hugo Boss, Armani (the fates)... iron out our future

Dull steel sparkles hot;
wrinkles' destiny is flat.
Fickle fashions fate


Tschuess,
Chris


18 comments:

  1. well damn,, if you can write like that after a bout of anesthesia,, maybe that's what i need to do to kick start my writing again!!!!

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  2. I will echo paisley's thoughts. I've been under the knife, been in that anesthesia haze, and mumbled. Then, I barfed.

    Great use of the words and great haiku.

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  3. I think maybe you should be under anesthesia more often...lol! These were wonderful! I hope you recover quickly from your surgery.

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  4. Chris: The "-kle" sounds are not necessarily easy ones to traffick with; however, no pedestrian you. These are very fun and very fine, the haiku and the Sentences. I have my favorite, though: all three (all six). Be well and go easy on the grog.

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  5. Love me some haiku. The last line of the 2nd one just rocked my world.

    Great, all three.

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  6. Dear scribe,

    Anesthesia certainly becomes you. They were all wonderful. I especially liked the imagery in the one on obsidian.

    Feel better.

    Teresa

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  7. you always make me think i can write poetry after i read your work... then i remember, no i can't.


    hope you are feeling better

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  8. The surgery was a success? Even though the patient awakened? Great...
    As always, the sentences and attached haiku are smooth, articulate and totally wonderful.

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  9. OMG, I am so impressed! Take care of yourself.

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  10. LOL Thom!

    I need to get me some of what you had. It appears to work.

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  11. Hey Chris, I have an idea to get you leaping up out of your bed...
    Go to Barbara Martin's blog and look at the pictures on her latest post. She has one of a lovely, HUGE black spider. You will be running up the Peak in a jiffy! Pommes would probably enjoy playing with that spider, too.

    Best Wishes for a Speedy Recovery,
    Teresa

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  12. @Teresa, thanks for the direction to those who wish to see a "spider".

    Chris, I heard you were recovering from surgery and I see you are doing well. Take care.

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  13. Lipo?
    face lift?
    changing your appearance to evade interpol?

    Hope you are OK!

    Aloha

    Comfort Spiral

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  14. They ring and they bite with a razor edge! Wonderful!

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  15. i havent been around - whats going on? what surgery

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